[aaloa supporters] The definition for AAL in the manifesto

Francesco Potortì Potorti at isti.cnr.it
Mon Sep 6 13:13:44 CEST 2010


>1. citation from the manifesto:
>
>    making smart use of technology to support well-being in the
>    preferred living environment for people who might otherwise
>    find this difficult (e.g. infirm or very elderly people who
>    want to continue living in their own homes)
[...]

>Hence, I just suggest to change it the following way:
>
>    employing technology to support well-being for everyone in all
>    situation of life, with a priority for people who might be hit
>    more by need for assistance (e.g. infirm or very elderly people)

I like the idea and the new text.

I think it could be improved (but I do not know how) by rephrasing
"might be hit by more need for assistance" into something more fluent.

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